短文改错专项训练(4)

Thank you for your offer invite me to the free 1. __________
summer English course in your school. As for my 2. __________
choice of the two courses, I’d prefer the five-weeks 3. __________
course for 50 hours. This would allows me more 4. __________
time to see your beautiful country while learned 5. __________
language. I’d like to do some traveling and make 6. __________
a few new friends. In all the subjects I’m learning 7. __________
at school, I like English best. I hope me to take this 8. __________
chance to improve my spoken English level as much 9. __________
as possibly. I believe I will have a wonderful time 10. _________
in England this summer.

【答案解析】

1. 把invite改为inviting。现在分词作定语修饰offer。
2. 此行正确。
3. 把five-weeks改为five-week。“数词+连字符号+名词”作定语，其中的名词要用单数。
4. 把allows改为allow。在助动词will, would及情态动词can, may, must等后面，永远要用动词原形。
5. 把learned改为learning。while learning=while I’m learning。
6. 在language前加the。特指英语这种语言。
7. 把In改为Of。subjects“科目”，English是其中一个“科目”，表示最高级的比较范围，若是整体与个别的关系，就用of。指时间、地点范围，才用in。
8. 去掉me。主语希望自己做某事，直接用hope to do sth，事实上，也不能用hope sb to do sth这一句型。
9. 去掉level。这是中文式英语。improve=make…better。
10. 把possibly改为possible。as…as possible(尽……)是习语。